This story is... strange.  It seems to me that it would be highly unlikely that an embassy of Earth would have a dragon lady and an inept dog man 'security' agent as employees - for rather obvious security reasons.  They should be human.  Also, the emperor wouldn't shrug and congratulate the ambassador on handling his bratty son - entering into the chancery and assaulting the representative of Earth (and grabbing him and attempting to remove him from the grounds is assault and attempted kidnapping) would be a HUGE diplomatic incident.  The emperor would be profusely apologizing and would convey the apologies to the government of Earth for the incident in the hopes of maintaining diplomatic ties (provided he had any regard for Earth or her people at all).  You wouldn't need some nebulous evil entity as a bad guy, the crown prince could bring war all by himself.   Dog man Magnus there should be removed as a member of the security detail.  He's repeatedly shown a remarkable ineptitude at actually *being* a personal security guard for the ambassador and his ceaseless 'joking' (and I use that term loosely) makes it difficult to take anything about him seriously.  Also, he should be outside the chancery, not inside.  He's not a diplomatic member chosen by Earth and, as such, wouldn't have direct access to the ambassador  (also, it would be Earth that would choose the members of the diplomatic mission, not the Emperor). 

Definitely a strange story.  One thing I do know is that this story seriously needs proofreaders.  Typos and errors abound and who is Mr. Thompson?  

The mac version does not work?

Been some time since I played the original version of this. Can't wait to see all the changes.

Thank you for your work Bob, I can't wait to play this!

Thank you, Bob, for your GIANT amount of artwork and writing.

75k is still multiple updates worth for other VNs! That's an amazing amount of writing!

Blessed are the Chibis!